Write an original college admission essay in 650 words appropriate for High School students about the linkage between UFC fights and business administration undergraduate major. The essay should include the example of the UFC 165 fight between Jon Jones and Alexander Gustafsson that took place on September 21, 2013, at the Air Canada Centre in Toronto, Ontario, Canada. The essay must mention my MMA Training at Royal Tiger Academy instructed by ex UFC fighter MASTER KENJI SAYKOSY. The essay should include my familiarity with basic business concepts through taking self-learning Udemy courses such as Economics, Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Time Management. The essay should include my extracurricular activities including participating in DECA and Vagabond Toastmasters Club, running clubs such as Future Business Leaders of America (FBLA) and Young Investors Society (YIS), attending business summits such as Youth Entrepreneurship organized by USAID, and National Youth Summit organized by Dept. of Commerce, part-time jobs in BestBuy and Calving Klein. The essay should include some uniqueness about my identity and why I like MMA fighting and why I think there is a connection between UFC fights and the business major I want to pursue.
I would sincerely appreciate it if you could make it sound sincere, appealing, compelling, pertinent, original, self-aware, passionate, and enthusiastic. Furthermore, I would greatly appreciate your help in infusing the essay with emotional impact and introducing some hooks that will captivate the reader’s attention from the very beginning. The essay’s content should revolve around my personal journey, experiences, and aspirations, which I consider to be an integral part of my college application. I believe that with your assistance, the essay should be a powerful testament to my character, goals, and suitability for the academic institution I am applying to. Your expertise and guidance would mean a lot to me, and I genuinely value your perspective as a professional writer. Thank you in advance for considering my request.
