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IDS 400 Module Five Activity RubricActivity: 5‐2 Activity: Reflection: Self

Course: IDS‐400‐X5852 Diversity 23EW5

Name: Mohammed Alshaghathirah

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident Criterion Score

Personal Experience 22.5 / 30

Criterion Feedback

You have described how critically analyzing the topic has positively informed your personal experiences. To reach proficiency,

please include examples exemplifying this in your paper.

30 points

Describes how critically

analyzing the topic has

positively informed

personal experience

22.5 points

Shows progress toward

proficiency, but with

errors or omissions;

areas for improvement

may include

connecting critical

analysis of topic to

personal experience or

providing more detail

about that connection

0 points

Does not attempt

criterion

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Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident Criterion Score

Bias 22.5 / 30

Criterion Feedback

You have described how examining bias has altered your perception of the world. To reach proficiency, please include

examples to support your reasoning.

Field of Study or

Profession

22.5 / 30

Criterion Feedback

You have made a good start in discussing the positive impact of critically analyzing diversity in your field of study or

profession. To reach proficiency, provide specific examples of how analyzing diversity adds value to your major or profession.

30 points

Describes how

examining bias has

altered ways of

perceiving the world

22.5 points

Shows progress toward

proficiency, but with

errors or omissions;

areas for improvement

may include

connecting the

examination of bias to

perceptions or

providing more detail

about that connection

0 points

Does not attempt

criterion

30 points

Explains how critically

analyzing diversity can

positively influence

field of study or

profession

22.5 points

Shows progress toward

proficiency, but with

errors or omissions;

areas for improvement

may include

connecting the critical

analysis of diversity to

field of study or

profession or providing

more detail about that

connection

0 points

Does not attempt

criterion

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Total 77.5 / 100

Overall Score

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident Criterion Score

Leverage our conversations in class discussions or materials to illustrate these examples.

Articulation of

Response

10 / 10

Criterion Feedback

There are no major spelling or grammar errors. Ideas are communicated effectively. Great work formatting the paper in APA

style.

10 points

Clearly conveys

meaning with correct

grammar, sentence

structure, and spelling,

demonstrating an

understanding of

audience and purpose

7.5 points

Shows progress toward

proficiency, but with

errors in grammar,

sentence structure, and

spelling, negatively

impacting readability

0 points

Submission has critical

errors in grammar,

sentence structure, and

spelling, preventing

understanding of ideas

Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident

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